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So this is me, attempting to draw a Mordin I'm satisfied with.
The old, half-assed Mordin I was drawing is on the right, and the new one (which will be a younger, angrier version of him) is on the left. Derp.
So I WAS going to do neutral Mordin, which was boring and bland, but now I'm doing young, impulsive Mordin, which I like a lot better! :D

Hopefully my camera will hold out for just a little while longer, and I'll be able to take progress pics. I honestly don't know how it's gone this long without a charge, it's been on 'dead' for like.... a month. :dead:

Finished: [link]

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EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
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KODAK V530 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA
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:iconchaostro101:
First of all, allow me to say that you are a way better drawer than me. How much better? I'm willing to say you're an adequate drawer, whereas my style looks like a two year old taught his pet chicken to draw.

You got the scar on the left side of his face right, so good job there. The area around his eyes looks scrunched up; I'd suggest expanding it a little to make his eyes look less asian and more salarian (if that makes sense)

Also, the stump on his head (the part that's missing....I guess it's a stump :shrug: ) needs to tilt more to the complete one. Finally, Salarians don't have long necks. Chop it down a little to where his chin is closer to the base of his neck.
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~Lootra Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's coming along nicely. :)
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=Spyke1985 Nov 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :D
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